the Charcoal Man by riopel2daliLife....
fast, blurred, gone in a wink
make use of your time, you need to think
your days are short but the time feels long,
so sing the words to your favorite song,
and enjoy the time thats given to you,
do whatever you want with a smile anew
That is the exact same percipitation i have on the world aswell. Life is short so live it to the fullest is what i'm thinking the theme is. Very goooood.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem. It has a really nice rhythm to it. I also like how it isn't cliche, like most rhyming poems are. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis would be a good visual to include with the carpe diem prompt.
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